I'm always happy when a new post here pops up on my reading page. Woohoo, your story's working! :)

One minor thing seems to be missing (though I get if you don't want to edit at this point). There's a reference to someone that's unclear - who is "he" that's a logical suspect?:

“Who else have you talked to?”

“No one, you’re the first, because I knew where to find you.”

“You think he’s the logical suspect?”