I'm always happy when a new post here pops up on my reading page. Woohoo, your story's working! :)
One minor thing seems to be missing (though I get if you don't want to edit at this point). There's a reference to someone that's unclear - who is "he" that's a logical suspect?:
“Who else have you talked to?”
“No one, you’re the first, because I knew where to find you.”
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Date: 2020-09-17 05:41 pm (UTC)One minor thing seems to be missing (though I get if you don't want to edit at this point). There's a reference to someone that's unclear - who is "he" that's a logical suspect?:
“Who else have you talked to?”
“No one, you’re the first, because I knew where to find you.”
“You think he’s the logical suspect?”